this piece was great...it's like a diary entry, after a great night....but
"pizza crust in the beard, think, this is us"
"Blessed is Rama of Ayodhya."
i might be a moron...but i dont understand that. Maybe you could throw some meaning my way?
other than that...i...
this piece was dope
Sounded like a summer story you would recall when you're in old age...maybe a story you would tell your kids, or...
damn....sorry for missin this....this piece was crazy....i re-read it a few times, even though i didnt have to...it was just that good.......the...
is this about sisqo or somethin?
you are an emotion....or some form of an emotion (anger, tears, etc... mold it into whatever you like )
good lookin out, mayne
^^^chea, agreed on that quote....that was hot to def.....
whole piece was incredible, an easy flowing read that just seemed very heartfelt
questions 3 through the end....were straight fire....couldnt have said it any better
good ish soul...
"And I, a mere poet
Drunk with the power of the pen and the pad
Likeness, the image of ~~~~~~~~~~
I felt myself a pure part of the elite...
That engulfs you
Laugh at acid moons that breathe emptiness.
He scattered his heart upon the floor.
Broke roses upon his canvas.
His life can be found in her voice.
The winter wind only makes love bitter....
damn...this was nice...havent' really seen anything in story form since i've been here....fresh approach....ending was dope....
"And each day was like Heaven, but its funny how Satan works huh?..."
painful....i feel ya, bruh....
this piece was great....
"Didn’t know the woman
She gave me no name
But her face was familiar
Now everyday she haunts my eyelids...
nice piece....i think the middle would have sounded beautiful spoken...
"On top of my mother
Crying one waterfall after another
Shes dead and so...
Nice concept, last couple lines stood out.
Before that, nothing really jumped out at me, but the piece was well written
keep it up
Piece was straight.
Real nice for a quick keystyle, keep it up
Three reply rule isnt in effect anymore, but you're cool for showin love anyways~~
piece was straight. I had to look up a couple words.
i hope i own you isnt shaft or a shaft impersonator. Anyways.
to be completely honest, only one part really jumped out at me.
"death waiting i...
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