Always nice to find a Dylan fan - "Oh Mercy" has so many slept on songs. nicely done.
loving the first verse. nice overall
well then, prove it. Defend your stance, or admit you are wrong. We're all adults in here, we should be able to reason shit out, right?
I did address his poetry. He interrupts too often.
I do like "Nutting", though.
why dont you write in the freestyle forum, shaft? battle forum . . . I know there's a more fitting section of the site for what you do. No hate or...
ps to predicate - a PHD is not comparable to a plummer or a seasoned ball player. Studying is not doing. Until you write your great poem, your...
I understand your angle, Anaphora. Saul is not my favorite poet either - I prefer Geoff Trenchard, because his words are fuckiing performed, on...
if he knew what he was talking about, he wouldnt have been such a defensive little daffodil anytime someone criticized him. And he wouldnt interrupt...
common people didnt interrupt their conversations with a moral. Wordsworth is overrated. But he was still important.
Actually, there are not a lot of good poets. You'd be lucky to find a few GOOD poets. Like I said before, nobody remembers today's poets. Back...
if you got something to say, key, say it.
woven in the fabric of my bones stem
sixth sense resonates when blessed
with the golden
breathing wisdom until my pores open
slop I swallow...
forgiven . . . I'll never be . . . momma told me
the sins of the father - fuck it and fuck you
the blood in my veins
will burn your skin black and...
Shaft is a good sport, and that counts for something. thanks for the welcome.
nope - the difference in quality should answer that question.
using rhymes to battle is fun, if its all in good fun. But its not poetry, and...
we both believed in love
attached to voiceless promises
leaning on eachother for guidance
as if either of us had seen
now they need stitches
so I fill in divisions or rather gaps
between thinly veiled raps
we all know that aint a poem
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