i really liked this piece man, very deep
thx for all of yoour replies
it has a roman mythological feel to it like the odysey or homer or something like that tight piece
very tight piece, i liked the imagery you use it seemed like a kinda painting in the beginning i got that feel from it, hot
xero there are people that write and people that just use the gift you my friend you r gift is writing and you wield you pen very mightly, snaps...
Dancing with death
someone im very close too has some issues with drugs so i wrote this poem holler
Bow to your partner and swing him around...
hey b apparently you are becoming the greater poet i knew you would become holler
if i could capture what i want to say in words for your hurt and pain and strength and power and faith and commitment and your love i would, but i...
no need for words of any kind, respect and stay strong
But to see her, was to love her;
Love but her, and love for ever.
yo i really like this poem it was tight the whole message and the relatability of the poem is great, i hear you and your plight, tight poem and stay...
very surrealistic and the imagery is great tight piece
as usual your poetic aptitude is excellent, i love the flow of it and the way your writing seems so steeped in tradition, i liked the piece a lot,...
i liked the question too i think you could even make it more poetic if you wanted to, but regardless i liked it
this is good, its like an rkelly song, i think u should proof read so it is easier to read just myy opinion, neway i liked it alot keep posting
a new poem its been a minute but i will hit some people
Shockwaves through your heart
I want to write a poem for you that doesn’t send...
i liked it, it has a very shakesperean feel to with the wording and usage, nice drop
i liked it, it did seem like you kinda were getting into the deeper emotions and stopped the poem, i think you could expand on it but i liked it, i...
a very intense visual poem, meaning the imagery you used is strong and makes you see such clear pictures of what is going on, tight drop
i used to work with hiv and aids people in some people have this mentality so i feel the concept and can see the person saying this to someone after...
i like the set up of the stanza but it did feel a little disconnected, i felt like you were taking me somewhere but i'mn not sure where, stay up
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