its ok lol i wish i could delete em but i cant ::tear:: I love yall man thanks.... by the way thats my favorite line too.. its so much more shit i...
Thank you guys and ^ IntheStars... please be safe over in iraq.... Thank you
I think I'm probably posting too much at once but this gone be my last one for a while, bout to start school and I wont have time to be here :-( I'll...
very original title...lol not(i put one on here the same title) i like the poem... have u ever thought the girl felt the same way about u? she's...
Thank you!! :-)
k thank u
This is really just a mumble jumble of thoughts put together, its how i feel its my opinion so I want all the feed back the good and bad, i might...
thank you lala
I remember what it was like to be held by love,
Adored by love, kissed by love
I remember when love meant a whole lot of nothing
Thanks for the comments guys... For Aura, when i write i write based on my feelings and judgement, i cant just up and write a poem that doesnt mean...
X this was cute, lemme find out u pickin up girls on the street we gon fight 4 real lol holla back
I lik this, its deep but it reminds me of wen my sister was pregnant and she would be in her i hate you leave me alone moods and then it was i love...
This was very sad, but could relate to it so well, i feel like you been spyin on me... lol this was a nice peice and im feelin it on the real tip,...
It was a rainy day when I met you
After talking to you at first
I figured you was the type of brotha
Who wanted to beat and leave
So I played...
I like this poem, i felt like you had some pain in you wen you wrote it.. Keep writing it,
"I felt love brewing in hearts,
Producing loves steam,...
I'm feeling this X its good... but boo the color im already blind :-)
Thanks for your comment Lala, sadly to say it is true, and it's def. not the first time but i hope it'll be the last. i know plenty of girls who's...
Yo amor tu, muy mucho
tooo funny... anyway i liked the poem its hot
Touch me? No
Tease me? No
Lick me? No
Please me? yes
Do what you do put me on fire boo
Send me on a rush
Give me what I need
With a smile resembling radiant sunshine,
And a soul that makes her glow,
How could you treat her like a hooker?
Reduce her to your hoe?
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