Cause... this is the best piece i've read today... mainly because I relate to it's content ... there was a time I was litterally trapped... and this...
Nice piece, I live in canada aswell, I've heard saskatchewan is a ruff and kinda stuck between times. Very nice piece overall
I felt some anger... in this piece... I like it thou...." you show illusions with tricks of maturity..." I don't know what you mean't by it, but I...
haha! " I got what you need, indeed the seed..." sweet line
This was nice, I've always been a sucker for these types of poems. It's an easy read, I enjoyed it.
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