man I haven't been on here for so long.. here's a exercise I wrote just now.. just trying to get the words out.. I'm trying to get back into the...
nice little poem.. I can relate..
"I fear your growth if I stay small
S hadows are where these anxieties crawl"
that part probably stood out...
Insanity beats the door
I stand with both hands shaking..
The fear mocks me with silent expressions
sticking it's tounge out like a snake
I'll give you my insight..
"Trying to write poetry"
first don't have that type of mentality "trying to write poetry" I've...
I thought it was 3?
Lover's Face Tears as Stones
Love stuck it's bald head out of the trashcan..
unconcious for days it creeped out on all 4 legs and crawled.....
Let me tell y'all my trip that I had when I was visiting Writer's Block..
Writers Block Avenue
The sky stood frozen above my head like a...
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Falling Into Pieces
The grass slowly laid down like fingers..
falling asleep right in front of us...
I liked the multi-meanings in some of the lines such as..
"While sitting on the park bench drinking some cold OJ,
when I seen a bronco ride by...
lol true.. thanks for pointing that out to me.. and thanks for the comment..
Starting up writing poetry again.. I haven't posted on here in along time.. since the last time.. I've wrote awhole bunch.. mostly Journalizing and...
loved it definitely can relate to the emotion behind the whole poem..
one part that stood out to me was..
"We try too hard
to mask over...
Thank you for the love y'all as always it's appreciated.
Her name is misery she cries tears of blood
Regret drips out of her veins like glue the color of mud.
She cuts herself with her memories to try to...
ummmm... I like this it was a nice piece.. simple but that's what made it cool it was real easy to read..
I can relate to some of the lines thru out the poem...
"and I think it's sad I will probably never see you
some might say
this was a nice piece... sort of reminds me of a piece that I wrote awhile back ago.
"I pray in the name of god
But I leave his buildings empty"
ummm.. got me thinking on that line..
Liked this it was cool.. I can relate to...
I thought this was a nice piece.. had a nice little flow to it..
yeah, this was cool.. i can definitely relate to it.
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