thanks for the replies..
uppin' for more feedback
Longing to escape what she calls life
Sees the front door open and makes a run for it
Away from the fucked up existance thats been branded Family...
thanks for the feedback guyz
its much apreciated
lol.. thanks.. i think..
but this was jus the 2nd half of the original poem..
i didnt wanna post both parts as one poem cuz then it would seem...
this was off the chain for realz..
this was madddddd deep...
vocab was good
im really impressed...
i'll drop some proper...
thanks for the feedback yo
thanks for the feedback guyz...
from the darkness of poetry I emerge, a step at a time
leaving lightning and thunder in a swirl of emotions
Words intertwined like ivy and roses...
this was jus like.... Damn...
the imagary was incredible
this was off the chain fo realz
My resistance brought me here, to this hole, this chamber, this casket, padded with demons screaming to get out. They don’t hear them but I do,...
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