and so the fun begins.
as to members active.... 100 quality mc's/poets/members vs thousands of useless screen names is a battle we...
wow.... if any of yall do audio i'll gladly send yall back to ur site
haha. says the man whose last freestyle was last year (check his...
im recruiting soldiers sir. *salutes*
if this was home, someone would have jumped in her quick talking shit.
niggas too busy running around in their skirts.
i was lost for a little bit.
and now i know...
why you are lord of this realm.
ahh my short three word lines!
somehow i feel you moved freely here.
see thats why when i really rip open,
i write in so chopped,
i say you write about how the first piss in the morning feels.
getting the fresh donuts when you go to the donut shop...
im so sorry.
but a plastic owl?
dammit. do something else other than a religious poem.
im not saying...
i beg to differ with Nebulaz...im glad you changed the sructure
infact i dont believe the piece actually began until you said
ahhh ripe for the picking.
sickest work ive read here yet.
one thing mama...and i have a trouble with this also,
but its only...
this piece was much better than the previous one i replied to.
infact i can say i enjoyed it.
my only qualm is this...in rhyming one is...
its not that i didnt understand your piece...i didnt like the presentation.
thank you for your flattery on my piece.
it was more of a blog than...
i didnt like the whole thing.
and my response was geared for the entire poem..not just one line.
aaaand youre right...
and how the hell did you come up with all that?
cause i know damn well its not in the bible.
^ just an observation...
you are a god fearing man who believes in horoscopes?
a tad conradictory no?
lol. ay me and my nit picking.
am i the only one who found this overly cliche?
i had read this just didnt reply at the risk of sounding reduntant.
i want tiah to do new things with her pen.
quit being a stubborn crazed cow...
the soil birthed me,
nymph of the ground
I have come
to deliver you from
to push you into
get on aim wont ya woman?
sorry it took me so long to post something.
ya know...busy busy busy.
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