i appreciate it man. im still waiting on the people that said they would get back at it later. ;)
wow .. i love the ending .. the whole poem you think that its going one way, and it switches up on you at the end .. good stuff man, fun to read
no problem .. i like to read other peoples poems and compare it to my style of writing .. thanks for the feed
i appreciate it. and Selph X, i appreciate all the critiques.
im at a loss of words, like my...
look at the other poem you posted, and the response i gave applies to this also .. except i feel that this piece shows the topic more and expresses...
decent piece .. but, again, it sounds more like a rap. in poetry, try to make more imagery in your words, and make the images stand out in the...
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