see you on the funny pages
this is too much words for you to handle,
sometimes words sound rushed, too many syllables in too short bars,
it makes me feel uncomfortable to...
fix the bass in the track, its fuckin up my ears,
haha I like your style, not a little a boy, haha that cocky steez, thas cool,
shorty could sing,
didnt like how you said "had said", sounded unatural,
but then again T.I.'s "I have to go and cancel my" line sounded unatural...
mad laid back,
but the beat didnt fit and neither did the lyrics to the vocal mood, you gotta change it a little,
ron jeremy line...
"face it" is mad basic, dont use that in ya rhymes,
didnt like the topic, its just that same underground artist jealous of the commercial status,...
dayum... wtf happened,
first MC had a ill head knoddin style,
second mC's voice sounds like Xzibit,
nice nice... hooks wack though, but...
critique and Ill critique yours
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