Take him out he’s done, this boy just ain’t a rapper
With rhymes about as flimsy as a kit kat wrapper
You ain’t dapper, and you ain’t smart
I put my guitar down..I picked my mike up
Spit a lyric and you hear it and get psyched up
So you were psyched up, til you got shot down
So now you...
Gsus and JA in your own little showdown
With words 'bout as catchy as the hoedown throwdown
So wait now slowdown & quit while you're ahead
I suppose i'll battle you i won't stand a chance of winning but what the hell i'll give it a shot.
Nope that was good some sounded a little forced put in general it kicked ass. & the last line definately shound be click.
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