12 Line pic battle.. who want it?
Hands down the best poem i've read in awhile. Too much to fucking quote. Ima have to show some friends this.
Like my talent didn't exist,
Felt like I was speaking just to be speaking,
Thoughts leaking rather then thinking,
I tried leaving it all behind,
I apprecaite yall.
I wrote this purely out of anger. So there's a reason i'm a little direct.
IM READY TO FIGHT BACK
I'm sick of you women doggy us men as if...
Love can't mean a constant war,
A continuous battle of harsh words,
Attempting to rip apart the heart of your love,
I loved this piece. Sooo true.....
""Alltel you later, I'm roaming with AT&T"
If it's really that important, we could talk when we meet"
I'm feeling this joint a lot. Very solid.....
as the white would surrounds,
I realize it’s the closest I’ll get to my
^^great Imagery here. The picture in itself is fly....
Thanks For The Food For Thoughtt, Definately Something To Think About..
Possessive lights enlighten
Demands that mean nothing at night
a midnight sweat
I wonder what she dreams at night
If given the slightest chance would she leave that night
^^This stood out To Me..Maybe Because It Damn There...
The windows by it's side are smeared with blood that
I shed from my sorrow as I gripped the rose and
strangled the stem in belief I could smother...
I woke up and lost my yesterday
And yester-year seems just as promising
Tomorrow’s morrow as last year follows
This Was A Soft Drop, Very Heart Felt.. Although It didn't Hit From The Beginning..To Me I Think It Would Of Set Harder In My Mind, if The Beginning...
The more she talked, the more inviting it was to submerge every ounce of myself underneath the surface of that clear skin, skating in my own and...
This one may have went over my head but ima take a stab at it..What i got from this was, a lady confused in the mind, chasing after someone she...
Very Powerful Man..Truly, This Hit Me Hard...
Severed realities and Group Mind,
they reject our thoughts and our mores,
their art is refreshing...
Damn Dude..A Little Long My Ass..I'll Read Later During Class When Im EXTREMELY bored..
I camouflage who I want to be, to be stereotyped as who I’m perceived to be.
^^That Struck Me The Hardest..Took Awhile To Decipher The Meaning...
Brilliant..Very Refreshing To Witness Something So Original And Creative..
Extrememly Well Writen, If Not Perfected..Nice Piece
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