wonderful. i can actually realate to this. i lyked the wurds used. keep this up
this was tight. i could lyke actually see it. im actually luvin the whole thing. keep this shit up fareal
this was tight but it was too small. i lyked tha stle though but my fav. part was tha end too. keep this shit up
i lyked it but i hated that end
i lyked how the word line was used during the end it makes ur title makes sense.my fav parts was
"My determination blocked by my lack of freedom"...
this was straight but it couldve been a lil more descriptive or detailed. but keep wurkin at it
this was hott!! keep this up foreal. i did think it was about gettin high though lol, but it was good.
i revised the furst one, tell me if its better or anything else, cause it still needs a lil wurk
…When there's nothing else to do
i entertain my...
i lyked this foreal i aint have no fav. part cause it was all tight to me so keep it up
Seeing her die by the means of hatred
This creating pain has took it’s place
Never to breathe can’t hear me breathe
damn!! this was tight i lyked the whole thing. keep this up foreal
#3 was my favorite too. keep this up foreal
i lyked this fa real' had me fooled too i thought it was about sum gurl, nice twist keep this up
thanx for tha comment. i will change tha endin though cause i reallly did run out of stuff it was jus sumthin off tha top of my head. but thanx for...
When there's nothing else to do
i entertain my self with thoughts
thinking about tha world
and how it would be if we never fought
i loved it my favortie part was the end though. it was descriptive to me, and it was enjoying to read. keep it up
man i lyked this, but my favorite part was tha end, that did it for me. man keep it up foreal
i lyked it alot my favorite part was:
One day I’ll step across that predetermined stop point
and cause much needed chaos
Enough so I can get...
Well my name is jus my real name spelled backwards.... and my momma wasnt drunk when she had me.
i lyked this alot my favorite part was tha end keep it up
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