i can definately relate to this piece and proabably more so the frustration be'in that my mom has lung cancer and was to be dead (according to...
L I F E I S E M P T Y
F inding a person to trust may be impossible
E veryone has two faces
I fear your...
Alright it's been a while since i've posted anything on here.
Genie was a woman who guided me through childhood. She died of cancer without...
I gota like the message, its a real tight piece
Some say youth dont understand love, I believe they do. They experience it without having hesitations' without having being tainted by the emotional...
This whole things sounds ill. Post my last poem in it. Whats the funds needed?
I came out of nowhere...
This was deep. Wicked flow still.
I would love to be in this. Just tell me how.
How much $$ to set it off.
This piece reminds me of the only girl ive ever loved. Its really well done. "It lasted until my breath no longer did"
Its a sic topic. Escaping death and seperating it from life. One step removed. Its ill.
Now I'm a ripped pair of pants and a dirty shirt away from being naked
At times I wish I were a bolder man, with the wisdom of an older man...
I came out of nowhere, I've been here before
I was uncut 'for any one of you was raw
I learned the ropes, I skipped over tokes
Don't read my shit...
7. Why do you visit the Realm?
8. Who's influenced you the most here?
9. What poet do you most respect here?
10. What kind of music gets you in...
This was well written, couldve worked on the flow a bit tho. But still, the message came across, nothing worse than a lost love, and the emotion put...
I take a heavy burden off my chest
The burden is my piece of mind, but some call it a vest
Either way forever, my prayers have been unanswered...
Replying to The Chair
A glimmer of hope fades as the darkness arises
Slowly, I crept out of shadows that bright light despises
Its not brave but...
Pacing forth and back, been in joints for some time
To protect myself I had to turn to commiting crimes
Spray me down to stop me, suspend me in...
This is a completely different style than I usually write, but ima still post it.
You hurt me every time we speak, you rip my emotions apart
"where am i mr.? if its ok to say it
your right here....no no, where's myself located"
Trust that I can relate to being lost in where I am in life....
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