[FONT=Arial Narrow]Where were you at
when i needed you the most?
My one true friend,
we used to be so close.
THe blade slides down my wrist...
Leave your hand prints on my body
To show where you have been
Make a memory in your mind
Of all you have seen
Taste my lips of poison
love. that is merely just a word. this poem was beautiful in every dimension.
this was good. it really touched me. i loved every essence of it.
FreakEmoWriter9, you are my hero. You write things that i could never. I don't have the courage to write things such as those. I feel what you write....
Tears stream down her face
Blood runs down her arm
One more thing went wrong
Another act of self harm
Her blood and tears mix
I want to scream and I think I want to scream out for help
But rather keep that scream to my self
Instead I give you a smile, pass you a joke, or...
this poem seems really emotional. but hidden emotion. i love the way you started it out. turning back the hands of time is everyones dream. i feel...
i loved this! it was really good. there was a rythm there like no other. good job!
Burrowed deep inside
is the pain i won't emit.
Hiding from the light
and worse than I'll admit
My pain just floats around
this is really good. almost had me choked up there.
i really liked this. it was really good. you are very talented. i liked the beginning of it the most.
oh my gosh girl. that was sooo good. its like i could almost feel what you were feeling.
She couldn't stand the silence,
She couldn't stand the tears,
She couldn't stand her life,
After only sixteen years.
He was her entire world,...
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