Majick and the Movement of Clouds
When I was a boy who looked to the sky
and heard thunder, I thought the giants
who lived far above must be...
We are not good
men. We are the men
made us. The dread
of wars they waged
against men, to who
they too were...
Great use of language throughout, especially with certain flipped concepts and wordplay (Adam + atom). You have a great control of sound in the...
I'm diggin the concept but it falls apart at the little things, mostly grammatical. Couple that stand out are 'it's' instead of 'its' (l2),...
Greetings poets of RM,
Years ago I was a very active writer/moderator back on the now defunct 411hype. Back then I went by the name TheDeadPoet....
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