I wish my home girl made out of bail,
so I don't have to travel 24hrs see her in Jail.
I wish the children had to eat,
I wish nobody over 6 feet....
I love it! nice emotions & I'd love how you express yourself.
Look like u need more work, work on ur complexity, flow, Creativity,.
you awesome writer well written
I love it this was wonderful
This is decent creativity was on point
I think it need more complex keep dropping
This is tight I like you put emotions
wow this is amazing
this is one of my favorite poem I enjoy it alot
I respect that
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