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if you leaped off everest into the weakest state, would the fall kill you before you drop?
does faith alone survive deep inside? its cloudy...
[An old peice. Worked sort of hard on this one so i could use some opinions, thanks]
A LONELY SECLUDED PLACE PLACED HATE
NO FIRE ESCAPES, BLACK...
im my favorite.
^ iight cool I'll send you the peice through e-mail whats your address?
has to be read aloud in a quick pace.
approach the scene.. sunrays makin' the ice gleam.. just seen some nice ice cream
steamin tight jeans.....
this was doper then a dime say of pot.
just broke the pen, I’ll start writing with metal shards and magnets
Pen strokes have me creating again
this peice was wikked i liked it....
The king did indeed speak truth, for his courtyard was now vastly fleeting.
And with that, the man was out; now on came the ghastly bleeding.
^ lol yea i had a bad feeling it that might be the case i wasn't sure. thanks for the critic. the next person who sais the same im gonna edit with...
aryon babarians carryin' swords
with handle shaped canarians by the peire ends
we're getting invaded by aliens
buryin' their flags on our grass...
good peice im really feeling the concept and the emotional pull to it. great peice. madpoet.1.
good peice its really emotional.. i like it, it was a short peice and it was nice. madpoet.1.
goood peice i could really feel the imagery and it had a good emotional read to it. good stuff. madpoet. 1.
[this is the RM version of this poem i wrote. I'll drop the original some other time. This is one of my more serious poems like the collab with...
Get the fuck out you dog faced faggot
besides, girls like how i look. why are you paying so much attention to my pics anyways? fuckin fagget
^ who do you think you are? you polish sausage eating son of a whore
im a titan man.. i'll slash ya like a hyphen man.. I'll take your life an wife just typen man
LOL.. alright man lets do this...
garbage, simply garbage is well put for this.
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