up this shizznit!
Ima keep this short cus i got a hangover, lol
anyways trap got mad nice multis and a real good vocab, a nice flowin verse and good...
damn this nice, 16 lines pure emotion! Im lovin this.. dunno what kind of critiz i could give so Im jus gonna say it was beautyful and keep doin ja...
Hey i never knew what this is..
Ur smile ur face ur kiss..
Damn Im hooked I love u for good..
Im confused tho, so nice so beautyful
Can this be...
this was nice, but i didnt feel ur rhyme scheme nur ur flow.. u wrote more of a poem here.. i really liked the emotions in...
nice concept, i liked how u explained the word fear in all the different situations but the constand repetition made ur whole...
TOPIC: Pictures On The Wall
I see colors, formin reason..
A bond between em, makes me see a new meanings..
A thinkin so twisted, this pictures...
iight Im here
sign me in!
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