Line 3, "Shards of the Truth Self inflicted"
Is now changed to... "Shards of all Truth acceding Shamefaced Anguish"
Meh...Now if only I could...
hmm...I made it rhyme...but I like the original non rhyming better...it still doesnt flow well even with rhymes though!:
Dwelling in this self...
impressive...flows nicely and has a huge shock-impact once one finishes reading it.
Dwelling in this Self Consumed Nightmare
Grasping out, empathizing my Reality
Shards of the truth acceding Shamefaced Anguish
mfb: i think its kinda cheap usin his pic, since you didnt post one up. your punches were alright..nothin' too spectacular. could'a dropped better...
soular guided: nice..you came overall nice..too many quotable lines that i liked lol..
yung impression: you gotta work on re-wording, and...
haha eternal..nice shit girl, you're pretty nice with it.
vote - path.
purf: your verse wasnt that bad but it seemed like you were battling eternal path the whole time, and it threw you off. but then you came back pretty...
al murder u...is gonna stomp him...lol.
airsoft gun..but guys, YOU"LL SHOOT YA EYE OUT!!!
viktojamaro's pretty ill... DJ b-roc isn't too bad either.
reflexx took this with harder hittin punches,
flow was more consistent, that gun line was pretty nice..
vern came with some nice punches but his...
Lmfao Butler killed this with everything you can possibly think of...this was a sweep like the redsox vs. angels... he took it with flow, punches,...
Is Janitor the owner of the site?
Lmfao people always assuming their someone else...how un-origional.
Take this shit to the ring..put on some Rocky Boxin' Gloves... and duke it out like the college university!
LMAO jot flame skilled this mother fucker...i'ma go with him on the vote... he came more consistent with his punches...flow...delivery...etc
Vote -- the penacillin kid...he fuckin murked you ROFL @ you trying to copy his style...and dude, that kid wrote his shit up in like 10...
That illiterate kid murked you...lmfao. Why don't you drop shit at him...? you a pussy kats?
Lmfao the RBL is doing fine as of now... the battlers needa step up their ante though.
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