10 Bars, No bullshit intro's. Simples as that.
I'm still pretty new to Text battling, So any constructive critisicm is appreciated :P.
Who gives a fuck - stop bitching, your acting like fucking morons, I somehow got the impression that this forum had some intelligent people in it,...
I gotta admit i came in weak there, my mind was in a different place, got fired from my job, thats what happends when you hit your boss i...
not my fault u got raped when u tripped and fell /
give me a lesson? learn to spell! /
what u sayin? its hard to tell/
not my fault u kickin in...
ill hit ya, im coppin ' ya /
im a printer - your a copier /
to the next guy - im on top of ya /
and that bitch that dissed proof - can suck my balls...
Aight, back from work (my boss is an ASSHOLE!!) gonna drop now against SpeedyCalhoun, 16 barz coming up:
i hop up , kick you in ur woom,
Aight, ill drop mine when i get home from work, im already late.
-Text Battle Only
Drop ya verse here and ill get back at ya asap
hey theres only one way to learn lol, im new to rap, im writing as much as i can, battling who i can, Muder Inc. - battle?
Edit: Completely mis-read...
yeh man, k-0, respect *Shakes Hands*
kk, lets do this shit, 16 bars.
Yo i got 2 words for ya - stop, listen /
you keep rapping about fags...an obsession? /
Im about to drop and give ya...
hmm didnt show anything, dya wanna just make new thread with poll and both verses? let ppl vote there
sure i would but how do you edit the thread title & add a poll?
lol i know i sound like an idiot - no need to point it out
Ohhh okay, yeh i didnt know that, cheers for the advice man, ill try to steer clear of it from now on. Im kinda new to the rap game, were my lyrics...
but feedin is
Thanks for the constructive criticizm im not sure what you mean tho, could you re-word it?
i run the streets like diddy-does, cuz,
i've got more bars than ya city-does,
good line bro, respect
welcome to the battle so- welcome to hell,
b-boy-jp? no! girl is spelt, g-i-r-l,
like it hurts to tell,
but please for fucks sake - learn to...
yeh alright, im kinda new to the text rap scene, 8 bars means..? like 8 lines?
Sorry man my recording gear is fucked atm, i wont be gettin a new mike for a week or two - thats why im doin text battlez
MC Kayper Vs BBoyjp
This is my first battle so im willing to go againts anyone really, just to get a feel for the talent pool up in these forums...
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