confusious says ^^^ shut up
anyway, nice but cliche's took from the impact of this. i mean, some of the images were cliched as opposed to actually...
silly newbie, shit is for tricks to spit
and it would be appreciated if it wasnt near triplicate
It'd be nice if we could get Jeff to do something like add a topical/Competition poetry forum. If we could do that it would make doing topicals a...
now this was something written for the hell of it
i know this... so there is nothing really to say
except that the disclaimer...
I been tired a long time
Been thinking bout home
Been tired a long long time
Keep think bout my home
But I been away from home for so long
soul through flesh is the begining of this piece
onstage with nothin to say
something to play
but really, i appreciate the purpose of the piece
i am working on a piece akin to this but trying a diff...
i was moved by the piece
i think if you lef tthe piece alone for maybe a month
then came back to it and deleted extra words...
works in progress
self philosophy manifest;
i could sing for you for days to hear
my soul my sight my...
in terms of "creativity", i was feeling the wordplay until the end of the first stanza
then i didnt see it going anywhere, and the...
i dont get it
i mean, i understood the internal rhyme; but what were you saying and couldnt you have been more clear?
me becuase i havent been here at all but would make a good mod.
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