thank u poet :)
lol i thought the link was gon b there
i got kinna freaked when i saw the pic
i was like.. wtf
lol its coo tho
the flows works, its gotta decent
structure & good vocab
im feelin the concept more then nething
this is a poem i keyed on anotha board
its my 1st eye candy piece ever
heres the pictures link.. so alla u can see
where i was comin from...
damn yall thanx :)
im definately feelin a lot
more love this time round
thank u white :D
im glad u like it mister,
but it wasnt my 1st poem
or my 1st poem here, jus
my newest poem, i havent
really been active...
I haven't dropped a poem on
here in a while.. so here goes
Who Would Have Known
(A Chance Meetin')...
welcome 2 the realm!!! :D
good poem, mos def feelin
the imagery & wordplay
My heavens have slowly
Merged into a hell
Around each fiery...
damn ice, that was very
nice, extremely heartfelt
i felt the emotion & imagery, it
has a good flow, nice wordplay
i love the whole poem,...
wow...that was nice, yet a bit sad
i liked the concept a lot, i think its safe
2 say that sum of us know how u feel
emotion, imagery &...
that was very sweet, i agree
with guy bout it bein original
good imagery & emotion,
nice wordplay, decent flow
thanx a lot u 2
dun sweat it @ GeMi
*sad, cries* tell ya girl im sorry fo her
loss, its never easy losin sum1 in ur
fam, esp. when ya mad closed 2 em
its beautiful, but sad cuz...
Do you see the tears fallin' down her face,
do you hear her cries late at night,
do you even care that shes hurtin',
do you have any sense of...
it does seem more of a flow then
a poem, but its not bad @ all,
even fo a short piece
the flow is good, wordplay was nice,
ya vocab could b...
wow, that was fucken illness lala
i liked the over all concept, morbid,
which i was very drawn to
the flow was on point, so was the...
thank u lala
thanx a lot girl
*sad* i wish my man would make a song bout me with words like that, but all he spits bout is hos & cars, bullshit meaningless stuff basically
its very well written, mos def a strong piece, good wordplay & vocab, nice imagery & emotion...
even tho u were here b4 me......
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