Ne-Yo . excellent song writter in my opinion .. and i can relate more to wat he says then chris brown .. lol , who cant relate 2 ne-yo .. i love that...
Yea , she nice on tha mic and i agree that she does swagger jack wayne ..but other then that the bitch is fine lol , she does have a fat pussy .. and...
this is ok .. culda been way better .. better then some of the majority of stuff i peep @ times tho .
keep it up
its .. ehh .. ok .. u can work on alott .. when u rap on that kind of track .. u wanna rap in a way a female wuld feel that shyt ..
it would help 2 post a link that works ;)
im feeln tha flow and emotion on this track .. tha wordplay is pretty good
this is pretty dope , good mixtape joint for a fact .. stay up
Nice flow first and 2nd verse , lyrics was nice .. lol , i like them verses
Chorus is ok .. but fits good enugh i guess
3rd Verse - NICE NICE lol...
Dammm this is a nice assss song , they really are sleepin 8.5/10 , im feelin dat joint man , keep it up , good quality , nice flow , good emotion ,...
o tru , im feelin it tho bro
o , dam i thought it was gon be wack , cuz no one responded to it , its pretty good .. 8/10 .. nigga's sleepin on ya , wake em up lol
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hmmmm , listenin ..
feelin that flow .. lyrics nice .. nice put togetha .. keep it up
o yea and da wordplay is nice as hell at parts
dam , this is nice lol , nice flow and good voice to beat and emotion , im feelin da beat also , good peice
8.5/10 .. keep it up
it's iight , beat too , sad .. lol , but im feelin da verses and hook is good
nice collab man .. that's some good work , be on the look out for my stuff stay up ~1~
olllll eminemmmm soundin ass lol , jp but u do sound like him ,
hmmm lyrics are nice and flow i give this 9/10 .. keep it up bro
it's straight .. could use some work , i mean da flow is on point and all .. iono culda been better thats all
im feelin it , was this just a topic , or do u really use no pen ..
yo i just checked it out man , nice ass song , im feelin it .. be on the look out for my track's , im tired of mainstream to man lol , we shuld hit...
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