yes, very unique, original and most enjoyable - another piece i dont completely understand, lol but what a good read!!
id like to think i understood this piece but i prolly didnt - heh....however, i loved it for what i understood of it - there seemed to be more than...
errrrr...ok then. lol.
i liked the concept to this, that you are poetry, and you live poetry, etc. but yeh....good for a keystyle. pz.
My most vital organ dismantled.
My solid trust has gone soggy.
And this tiny organ
hurts my big body.
niceness. solid story you've told...
Don't forget me
for i will remember you
as time slowly ticks her hands
something sweet remains although life taught me to die
i LOVE that...
I wonder why we try
Neither of us are good with stories
I guess we just lied
And I guess I’m sorry
i like the reluctance in those lines -...
wow. first off, ima have to apologise for not thanking all who have replied earlier than this....it has meant so much to me to have others enjoy...
can definitely feel this piece - not there at the moment but been there - its alrite - after awhile u get numb, and then start feeling bad about not...
yeah, really loved the concept and even though there seemed to be an element of '' seriousness'' to this, it was still so much fun to read. pz.
wow. the ending was so chilling - the whole piece had a kind of eeriness to it. a kind of bitter sweetness. pz.
yes, liked this piece very much - short but not simple, shows alot of thought in here me thinks. niceness. pz.
well when regestering i remember the word vinous having something to do with wine - being saturated in wine or fermented grapes, something...
its like, hearing someone tell you - maybe -
and knowing that they really mean
no, they''re just too polite
or chicken shit
to tell you no
yeah, the ending was what made this piece - that was hot, pz.
this was amazing - and there was no need for you to apologise - i must be very lucky catching you when i did cos it sounds like you havent been...
i loved this collab - bcos the styles i felt were so different and neither tried to fit their style into eachothers, but rather, complimented...
amazing - as all of your pieces are. pz.
havent read any of your work for awhile, this was definitely a different style to what i remember from you - but just as good - liked the rhythm to...
i really liked this -really enjoyd the first one too, it made me want more.
i also like how the first piece set the scene in a kinda innocent way -...
this was so very good, the repetition thruout just kinda re-enforced the pain that you were feeling, the whole mood of the poem was captured in every...
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