thanx for the replies
save it give it to him when your ready but i think he needs to hear it. if it's everything you want to say it's best when it's real this is real....
Even if this wasn't about you, you wrote it as if it could be. True calling of a good writer. very impressed. raw talent flows from you keep it up....
I like this a lot. I loved all the references to the singer/songwriters. It was beatifuly written and well layed out.
Tell me why did he run into that fight.
Why did he have to be the hero?
How many times did I ask him to back off?
I saw the knife that pierced...
As a writer you look for inspiration in everything. Sometimes it is in the trees. The clouds in the sky. Birds that fly overhead. The ocean and so...
much love and thanx for the responces
i hope things are good and this is only a poem
"when was I placed the pawn"
i love this line very original
much love hun
thanx for the comments
If there is such a thing as love I believe we are all in for something unexpected.
There is a sparkle that hangs around my neck in the sun it beams...
Faithful hearts become one.
In a time when there love is forbidden.
A secret shared between the two.
Her heart sinks into despair knowing...
As her body grew silent her breath motionless.
No more moans of pain.
I felt as if I could see her spirit rise from her body.
I should have...
thanks hun always good to hear from you
From within I dwell thought overtake me. I am angry, hurt I feel betrayed by my own being. I can not escape what is in me and if it is in me to wait...
You exposed my heart with this. I thought i would cry in a room full of people. Very well written. Very vivid. much respect
Many tears fall from my eyes daily as I struggle in this obstacle called life.
Never knowing which way to turn or how many roads lay ahead but...
Very beautifuly written. i misses you wrods and they bring hope hun. much respect
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