this was pretty nice, i liked how ya kept going back to the rain, it helped the piece progress, definitely feeling it
wow you ahd some mind blowing lines in there, crazy, i enjoyed it however the meter was off at a few points. you had great imagery and some profound...
this was pretty good, i liked some of it, it was pretty simplistic but the sincerity of it saved the poem, some parts were a lil too cliched, but...
uh sign me up crack.er 0-0
This has very deep personal meaning
Bluebonnets for the small town
Atop the radio, below the porch
Sprigs spring among the cotton...
O, Angel of avarice O, devil of wealth
Pray thee, Drink to my downfall, if you should drink to my health
Let my oaken bones be warmed by the runs...
i have hardly any posts, but...you can let me in 0-0
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