The Angst of the Teen
a strong teen, long seen as the next prom queen
the popular type, who's never put a foot wrong, or ever...
Hello and good luck
What's RHYME? is it some kind've topical league?
[teet] just kidding..
Pain - The 'cuter than gumdrops' simile at the start kind've lost me, but after that I really liked this piece. Especially towards the end of the...
Lucifer - First eight lines or so were dope. Felt like the beginning to a nice, slow moving story. The rhyming was tight, I especially like how you...
The Umbilical Noose
in the womb I was healthy, but at birth that got changed
the cord round my neck, cut off the blood to my brain
Here aswell. Good luck too.
Is This a new season? I Was 3-0 Or 3-1 When I Was Last In, Otherwise 0-0 I Guess. Anyone Remember Me?
You gonna drop a full verse or should I drop a short one like the above?
Lemme know and I'll edit in here.
^that would help me a hellva lot
my schedule means tha I seem to only have free time when its voting time rather than writing time..grr
Fair play on the predictions, but I'm no alias.
I've used this name for my topicals for over 6 years now (from UA to RnR), although I do battle...
gonna be good. apparently i'm gonna lose though..that sucks
I'm here. Good luck.
Great topics, gonna be a good week me thinks
Wow, didn't expect that.
Props on recognising an 'unknown' head.
Looking forward to competing again next week
Back in after my holiday.
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