I'm down just hit me up through pm!
As long as you stay on your toes
There was always another chance
To build confidence
Master your footwork
And hopscotch across ghetto blocks...
I liked the poem I thought that aspects of it could have been better off but other then that I liked it alot!
Thanks for the love absZero
Damn this drop was real nice I liked it alot. Before when I read the title I thought that this was going to be another gangster rap type thing but...
not really. I start writing what I'm thinking even if it is something random and then I see how I can make it turn out..
I heard he wasnt guilty on the radio..
Walt Whitman -
This is my first poetry site so nobody here that I can think of but abzero is really good..
I'm donw for this. It sounds challenging and it sounds real dope..
You and I skip along the clouds of heavens beautiful edge
Hand in hand we will never take that giant leap alone
So pure even after life.....
Damn this was a great poem abzero. I really love the emotion that this piece contains and i really liked the warn my bed line too.
This piece was real nice man I loved the way that the emotion captured me and the way that it made me think as a writer.
Walt your great with word and expressions
Always capturing details and thoughts
Loving every word that was read when I was a child
Touching me and...
Name of the business is Lix N' Stix.. It's like a tattoo company so I would appreeciate it if someone could hook me up with that..
I stand looking back on a land of lost hope
Now the sea separates our furious nature
I was headed no where until you betrayed me
Now I'm on my own...
Sounds dope . The league should be fun .
Damn my brother was loged on well fuck it still in..
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