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i will be honest.... i didnt like the end buuuut i LOVED the rest of the piece i liked the part about mama and the homeless people..... this was very...
where do u live that the city has trees? jus pondering that.... but newayz i relle liked this poem the imagery was sick.... good work
Where in guilty times do you see innocent clocks? They all hang for a reason.
that line made me smile.... this is an amazing piece i really...
how i came to hate poetry
was it there?
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with tilted eyes.......
u took stupid cliches and made beautiful poetry out of them... that takes much skill.... good job.. i liked it
a war in the mind? thas what i thought it was about maybe.... this poem was gracefully done i enjoyed it good work... stay up
i remember your dark denim blue jeans so tight on your thighs
as you glance
over your shoulder
not quite so bashful
flirting with 3 mexicans...
a high smile
a crooked smile
an arched back
a balmy breeze...
yoo its 1105 and ima post my shit in like an hour cuz im runnin maaadddd late
i use this thing that holds pictures up.. its like a lil weight then its a lil metal piece and a clip.... 4.99 at target lol
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this piece relle made me think bout my life and who im living for... i liked this poem.. and jus remember a civil war in your mind either way leads...
I’ve used words to express my thoughts and emotions adequately enough,
But sometimes silence can speak volumes.
I’ve heard that a picture can speak...
damn..... i can relle relate to this poem... i think alotta young women in the struggle can... MUCH love on this one it was beautiful
elo. poet's was more poetic but im relle feelin the concept of dark nebulas.... this was a close call but..
VOTE--- DARK NEBULA
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