i really appreciate all you reading it and thanks for the replies
yeah..for some reason i find smoke really fascinating
i liked this poem..the way you showed this struggle..and the fact that your lines were short and still powerful with metaphors
these lines stood...
The smoke dances so organically with itself.
With my face in the shadow,
the cherry on my lips still glows,
I stand there in...
beautiful list ..props
i'm one of those..drop in ..drop out poets..lol
I'm a 19 year old male from Estonia. I've been living out of Estonia for nearly half my life. Attended an International School in Moscow, Germany and...
yeah..a lot of the time i write for self ventilation..my best art pieces and poems have been done when i was depressed
i really liked this piece..the way you made the alcohol flow through your poem was well presented
yeah..its a little piece..it sounds a lot cooler when i read it out..lol
a little something i wrote on the train when coming from town :
Zooom my train goes,
it takes me to places
I see strange faces...
i dont have an idol
depression killed my writers block..dunno if thats a good or a bad thing :P
damn.. i really liked this .. the pictures were very sad .. i like the way you wrote it and the shortness of the verses.. even though they were short...
i liked this a lot..the idea of escaping reality makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside
also i like the structure of the poem..
thank you for the love and replies people..yeah..i know i've been away.. havent written a poem in ages and this was my start again..inspiration came...
Have you ever seen the Hollow man
Have you ever seen the hollow man ?
He walks, aimlessley, throught his thoughts and rain
talking to himself...
i see your skill hasnt changed..still beatiful images reflected..nice poem..and life has its many mysterious ways of introducing itself to us
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