You don't have to wear your hair in a bun
You can talk too much, like you often do
I can call you, when I'm under the gun
Because I know somehow...
Umm. That is interesting. How can you tell the difference? We are all masked by the anonymity that the internet provides. We could be male, female or...
Growing up, I wasn’t what most cats wanna be
I wasn’t cool with the girls
I couldn’t talk like B-E-T
I use to balance school and work
I keep feeding myself to you
Bit by bit
As you greedily consume me
Along with my sense of self
Me in you is an interesting switch
from the way...
Digging is definitely the strongest out of the two. You have pretty impressive imagery in both poems but to me the first one was lacking. It had...
Man, this is a powerful piece. "OD With death in his arm" keeps replaying in my head.
My mother never smiles
Her stone jawed expressions,
Lack luster demeanor
And coal darkened eyes
She is a spear
A spear of...
I could sense the aggression in this. I like your first stanza where you say " I'm not trying to be confrontational or aggressive or maybe I am".....
How you gone’ buy what you cant pronounce?
“Evi-gu jeans nigga!” cost a once
An eighth for the shoes, and a dime for lunch
Diesel in they’ veins...
I have a girl that puts on airs
She thinks that it’s a game when she takes me there
She spends her days much just like her hair,
very nice read, you've inspired me to write a piece. hope you dont mind its titled I use to be a Christian...
Sometimes its worth taking the plunge man, Geronimo! Overall its a good read.
Have you ever ridden a wave?
Experience the bluest of oceans
Sun beaming down on your back
As the waters break and swell
Sunsets that cover...
Watch as I pour,
The toils of my work,
From a journeyman’s tale of a hindered path
As endless as the hands of time I ooze,
I've been gone for so long, It is refreshing to be back and have the privillege of reading an eloquent poem. this was a good read, I thought stanza...
Enjoyed you piece, and like absolute said it was in rap format with the verses and all that, but if you took some of the key focal points and ran...
Definately read like an Essay, but the subject matter was strong, I wasnt really sure of the way in which you wanted it to flow but much love.
Read this, it was just a some new stuff from I was meditating on.
Five hundred and four hours
Thirty thousand, two hundred and forty minutes,
To equal no seconds
Man this piece was interesting I thought this portion was particularly interesting though .."and what light fisted hand would linger
if night was...
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