^lmao at that sig.
as much as I hate surge he a funny mother fucker
its a good song imo
how did you get all that out of one line? What did I miss?
That new DMX song is grimy... on the last verse hes calling someone out... who is it? something about jacking Will Smiths beat?
a very good peice but I cannot get into the topic
ya I liked this one alot. the structure and the the point is just drove home
this was a good drop man it really makes you feel like your in the same situation
oh this is nice... it sounds like your in love...
Lustfully she moves in acting the temptress
Instantly you fantasize about her fuck me eyes
Slowly your mezmorized by the enchantress
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Some nice imagery in this. Very unfortunate and sad piece. You conveyed your ideas nicely
thx for the feedback
In the center of every burning soul
sits a cold emotionless hole
fed by an abandoned dream
A place where echoes seem to scream
and love exists...
Nice feel to the poem and a good rhythm. Sort of drags you along down a path and then you are slammed with the last three lines which by...
this was a good peice but This peice could be really tight. I think you should come back to this peice
this was deffinatly dope. You are so descriptive in this. The structure is great
mr nitty...congratulations on this piece man... this hit the spot for me today
how long did it take you to write this... just wondering anyway...
oh this was dope... the structure was flawless
oh this was tight i think the last line is the aftermath of the relationship
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